苏菲诗歌 《母语情结》 汉语、英语、韩语 三语对照 (苏菲英译,文超尘韩译)
Sophy Chen’s poetry,‘Mother Tongue Complex’ in Chinese, English and Korean (English translated by Sophy Chen, Korean translated by Wen Chaochen)
【中国】苏菲
《母语情结》
——波兰诗人扎嘎耶夫斯基印象
国际诗歌奖颁奖现场
室外大雨倾盆
登台领奖前,他总是
正襟危坐表情严肃
等着签名的读者排起长队
大家伸长脖子看他签名
一线落笔,沉默
似乎看不出一丝表情变化
你感受到他
哲学家特有的气质
“Nice to meet you Sir!
Could you sign…? ”
我自然的翻开诗集扉页呈上
他一脸茫然,翻译用波兰语
示意之后,他才挥笔
快速签上自己的波兰语大名
然后,默不作声
他恳切殷殷,我们却
如聋子般看着他,等到耳膜
终于灌进一句世界通用语:
“Ladies and Gentlemen”
语调优美,自然,令人欣喜
朗诵环节上,他似乎感受到了
观众的茫然与无奈,被迫逼出
一大段流畅的英语开场白……
2014-03-31 中国广州
(此诗刊载于《新世纪诗典》苏菲 日 2014-09-26 日)
【China】Sophy Chen
Mother Tongue Complex
—An Impression of the Polish Poet Adam Zagajewski
Rain cats and dogs outside
Before going up on the stage to accept his prize, he always
Straightens his clothes and sits properly with a serious look
Readers line up waiting for his signature
They are craning their necks to look at him to sign
Putting pen to paper with a line, in silence
It seems unable to see a trace of his expression changes
You can feel his
Philosopher’s unique qualities
“Nice to meet you Sir!
Could you sign ...?”
I naturally open the title page of the poetry anthology forward
He, bewildered, after his translator
Gave him a sign, quickly swipes
His pen to sign his name in Polish
Then, in silence
He speaks earnestly, but
We look at him as the deaf, until our eardrums
Finally are poured a lingua franca:
“Ladies and Gentlemen”
Beautiful tone, natural, gratifying
In the poem reading part, he seems to feel
The daze and helplessness of the audience and then he is forced to squeeze out
A large section of fluent English opening remarks...
2014-03-31 Guangzhou, China
(Published in the “Classics of New Century Poetry” Sophy Day 2014-09-26)
Translated by Sophy Chen 2016-02-16 Guangzhou, China
모어 콤플렉스
——폴란드 시인 Adam Zagajewski선생 인상기
국제시가상 수상식 현장
밖에서는 비가 억수로 퍼붓는다
연단에 올라가 상을 받기 전
그는 숙연한 표정으로
단정하게 앉아서
장사진을 이룬
사인을 기다리는 독자들을
지켜보고 있다
사람들은 목을 빼들고
그가 사인하는 것을 구경하고 있다
한 획으로 사인하고 침묵을 지키고 있는
그의 표정은 조금의 변화도 느낄 수 없다
마치 철학가인냥
“Nice to meet you Sir!
Could you sign…? ”
나는 시집 속표지를 펼쳐
앞에 가져갔다
그의 얼굴에는 망연한 표정으로
폴란드 통역의 의사에 따라
빠른 속도로 자기의 폴란드 이름을
사인하고 다시 침묵을 지켰다
그의 열정적인
한 시간이나 넘는 폴란드어
당선소감을 들으면서
그를 귀머거리처럼 바라보는데
마지막으로 세계 통용어가
귀에 들어왔다
“Ladies and Gentlemen”
아름답고 자연스러운면서
사람을 기쁘게 하는 그 어조
시 낭송회에서는 그가
청중들의 막무가내를 느끼었던지
유창한 영어로 프롤로그를 시작하였다
……
홍군식옮김
[中国] 苏菲 《荞麦花开》(苏菲诗歌原创)混语版《世界诗人》季刊 78期
[China] Sophy Chen Buckwheat Flowers Blooming (Sophy's Original Poetry) The World Poets Quarterly (Multilingual) Volume No.78

[中国] 苏菲
荞麦花开
秋高气爽,仰头望去
一湾压倒式的梯田
彩蝶纷纷 ,荞麦花开的正浓
成群的蜜蜂在花间低吟
蜜蜂和彩蝶铸成的花海
自然赋予它无尽的芬芳
午后若想打个小盹,去花海吧
仰面躺下,小伙伴千呼万唤
也寻你不着,甜甜 的做神仙美梦
此时,时光如若重返
我便携了心底的诗行
在九月的清晨出发
回到花 海深处,彩蝶曼舞
蜜蜂低唱,沐浴荞麦芬芳
爸爸说现在退耕还林了
荞麦花开时节是无边的林海
一阵松涛脆响,一股松香 袭来
仰头望去,山尖上云雾缭绕
2013-2-27 中国广州
[China] Sophy Chen
Buckwheat Flowers Blooming
The autumn sky is clean and air is crisp. Looking upward
In a bay of overwhelming terraces
Butterflies are one after another, buckwheat flowers flourishing
And swarms of bees humming among the flowers
Bees and butterflies make the sea of flowers
Nature gives it the endless fragrance
If you want to take a nap in the afternoon, go to the flowers
Lie on your back, and let your small partners call you a great many times
Yet can not find you, then you just do your immortal sweet dreams
At the moment, if the time were back
I would take my poetry at the bottom of my heart
Start in an early morning of September
Go back to the depths of flowers, with butterflies flying
Bees humming and buckwheat fragrance bathing
My father says it’s been returning farmlands to forests
In the buckwheat flowers blooming season it’s a sea of boundless woodlands
After the soughing of the wind in the pine trees, a stream of rosin hit
Looking upward, on mountain tops it’s mist-shrouded
2013-2-27 Guangzhou, China
Translated by Poetess, Sophy Chen 2015-03-01
苏菲对美国著名汉学家/诗人/翻译家Denis Mair (梅丹理) 就苏菲诗歌《荞麦花开》评语的自我解读:
苏菲的这首诗《荞麦花开》看起来十分普通,也没什么深刻的思想。可是老外看待这首诗的视角却不一样。今天刚刚发到国外诗歌网站:poemhunter.com,没想到老外对此诗歌背后的文化内涵十分感兴趣。如果不是老外今天给予鼓励,苏菲真的不敢将此诗拿出来了。不过今年的广州女诗人朗诵会上苏菲英汉双语朗诵了这首诗,自我感觉还不算太差。各大视频网站播放率还可以。现将美国著名翻译家诗人:Denis Mair(梅丹理)先生和苏菲的简短对话性评语抄录如下:
Denis Mair(梅丹理):
Hooray for buckwheat- it is a good, wholesome food crop! When I travelled to Xichang, Sichuan in August I enjoyed buckwheat muffins. You are lucky to have seen and smelled its flowers. I only enjoy it as food, but I never saw it in flower.. .
(9/12/2015 6:59:00 AM)
Denis Mair(梅丹理):
荞麦万岁 —— 荞麦是一种很好,很健康的粮食作物!今年,八月份,去四川,西昌旅游的时候,我喜欢荞吃麦松饼。你很幸运,见过荞麦花儿,还闻过荞麦花的味儿。可我只吃过荞麦面,却从来没有见过荞麦花儿。。。。。。
(9/12/2015 6:59:00 早晨)
Sophy Chen(苏菲):
My great poet and translator Denis Mair,
It's really a good, wholesome food crop, but it grows in deep mountains. My hometown is located in big mountains. When i was a little girl i could enjoy its beautiful flowers in every fall and had its food in noodles. My mother can cook it so well. If one day we met in China i can cook it for you and it's tasted so well and also good for health.
9/12/2015 6:59:00 AM)
Sophy Chen(苏菲):
我伟大的诗人、翻译家梅丹理:
荞麦的确是,一种很好,很健康的粮食作物,可它生长在大山深处。我家乡在深山里。还是小女孩的时候,每年秋天,都可以观赏到美丽的荞麦花,吃到荞麦面节节。妈妈做的好吃极了。如果,我们有机会在中国遇见,我会亲手做给你吃,我做的味道不错,也利于健康。
(9/12/2015 6:59:00 早晨)
Denis Mair(梅丹理):
This August I went to Luojishan Township (螺髻山镇) near Xichang in Sichuan, where I had lunch at a Farmers' Courtyard Restaurant. I thought I'd see buckwheat growing nearby, but we STiLL weren't high enough to see it. Now I know your roots are REALLY in the mountains.That's a nice picture of buckwheat. I look forward to trying buckwheat noodles.
(9/12/2015 8:11:00 AM)
Denis Mair(梅丹理):
今年8月我去螺髻山镇。此镇靠近四川,西昌。我们在一家农家乐吃晚餐。我本想去看看附近的荞麦花,但大家兴趣不高,就没看成。现在,我明白了,你真正植根于大山深处。这首诗展现了一副美好的荞麦图景。我期待吃到荞麦面条。
(9/12/2015 8:11:00 早晨)
Sophy Chen(苏菲):
Dear Denis,
Thanks for words!
I'm sure when you see buckwheat flowers in deep mountains you will write a nice poem and will never forget its beauty. In China, ordinary farmers do not plant it because it can not be planted in fertile soil and it needs to be planted at top of mountains nearly. Based on my experince in China I think you can not see its flowers in the countryside towns.
Sophy from China
(9/12/2015 8:43:00 AM)
Sophy Chen(苏菲):
亲爱的梅丹理:
谢谢你的评语!
我敢肯定,当你看到绽放在大山深处的,荞麦花的时候,你一定能写出一首绝美的诗,也永远不会忘记它的美。中国农民一般不种荞麦,因为荞麦不适合种植在肥沃的土壤里,一般几乎要种植在半山腰上。根据我的中国经验,我认为你在那个镇上附近看不到荞麦花。
苏菲,来自中国
(9/12/2015 8:43:00 早晨)
(苏菲Sophy Chen英译汉)